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Under The Rain

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I used to feel like I was always under my own personal rain cloud;
                      The sun would never s h i n e on me,
                                       & I saw things as ha|lf e m p t y,
                       Rather then even trying to see the possibility.

I used to keep my head d o w n,
                        Not looking at anyone, anything.
                                               L o s t  in my own suffering.

Everyone always stayed away;
                           Not because they wanted to,
                   But because I would p u s h them away.
                      {I didn't want the h e l p they offered}

Yet somehow,
        When you came around,
                         & Started to stick around,
            I didn't want you to l e a v e.
                 {Please, don't go}

I told you about my little rain cloud,
                           And how I always felt so
                                                           d
                                                                      o
                                                                         w
                                                                             n,

                     But instead of taking the rain a w a y,
                        You picked me up off the ground,
           & Carried me into the perfect storm.


"Hear the t h u n d e r,
             Taste the air,
               F e e l the sparks in the lighting, in our touch,
           Smell the fresh sent of h o p e in the wind.
       Do you see how close we are?
This is the farthest I'll ever be."

Then, you leaned down and k i s s e d me,
           & You took my b r e a t h away.

So with a smile,
       You taught me that,
        Being under the r a i n
            & Standing in the middle of a p e r f e c t  s t o r m
             Within the comfort of your love's arms,
                                   Can be,
                     One of the best places
                                   To be.
Taaadaa!!!! Number 30 in the 100 Theme Challenge, "Under The Rain" This is actually based on yet another story I have yet to write. XD

I think it's kinda cute, but you tell me :3

Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy it and thank you for stopping by to look at it! :D
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i love it as usual, you're such a wonderful writer. :D