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You almost made me forget, love.
   You almost made me forget the hurt; the pain; the sorrow.
      You almost made me forget about the emptiness:
                 You almost made me forget his name.

You almost gave me hope;
    You almost made me think that I might be whole again;
                                    Someday.
      You almost gave me hope that I can be fixed,
            You almost made me think that maybe,
                       I could fall in love again.
     You gave me hope that maybe; I really wasn't this
                               B-R/O-K/E-N

You almost made my heart beat faster,
   You almost made me really smile,
      You almost made me want to let you in;
        You almost made me want to be with you;
                You almost made me think I could be happy.

You almost made me forget, baby.
   You almost made me forget that he and I ever happened.
     You almost made me forget his face & his eyes; the color of deep emeralds.
         You almost made me forget the way he kissed me,
               You almost made me forget they way it felt when he held me.
                                     You almost made me forget.
                                      {Why couldn't you make me forget?}


You almost gave me hope that I was strong,
   You almost made me think that I had enough left to make it through,
                                   You almost gave me hope.

You almost made me think you could heal me,
  You almost made me wanna try and make it work with you,
               You almost became my light;
                                                      You almost became something to keep me together.
                          You almost kept me from falling apart.
                                                  You almost made me forget.

Baby, I want to forget.
I want to forget they way he looked at me with his dark forest eyes.
                        I want to forget his taste,
                        I want to forget his face
                        I want to forget the way he said my name;
                        I want to forget the way he said he loved me.
                        I want to forget he ever loved me.
                        I want to forget his scent,
                        I want to forget the way his arms wrapped so tightly around me;
                        I want to forget the way it felt to have him hold me.
I want to forget.
        {ithurtstoremember}

Please, darling, make me forget
                                      {therestoomuchpaininthememories}

MAKE ME FORGET!
                                  Please;
                                             I don't wanna remember.

These memories are haunting me,
But you keep the demons away,
So will you please stay?

You almost made me forget,
    You almost gave me hope
          You almost made me want you
& You could have succeeded in all these things but,
                               You left.

You left me alone for one short moment,
But it was long enough for the pain to come back,
& by the time you returned, I remembered everything.

You almost made me forget-
    I need to forget!

Baby, make me forget.
   Look at me with your summer-storm eyes,
    & be my summer rain in the dead of winter,
        Wash away my hurt, cleanse me.
          Drown everything out be the very existence of you, of me, of us.

I need to be held together,
So wrap me up in your arms and hold me close,
   Don't let go;
I don't wanna fall apart tonight.

Hold me closely,
Let me heal in your protective embrace,
Let me forget,
Erase my pain with your words and lips.

I don't know exactly where this is going
All I know is that I need you, you make me forget the pain
& Right now, that's exactly what I need,
So darling, hold me, kiss me, tell me you love me,
& Make me forget.
Taadaa. :3

Another poem I wrote a few weeks ago. Although, re-reading it now pains me because the person I wrote this about is no longer here. He told me he hated me. So Yeah, this kinda hurts because I wrote this about how he made me forget about my ex, and now I have to find some way to forget about him. Uggggh D:

Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy the poem and comments=love! :heart:

<3

Kandyi
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:iconfoxtrotrecruit114:
FoxTrotRecruit114 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
I feel the exact same way here...
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It sucks, but I promise, it gets better. :o
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This.
Was.
Is.
Fantastic.
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, thank you so much <3
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I am simply amazed by how wonderful this poem was. I am so sorry to hear the pain you suffered when it comes to your ex boyfriend. I liked the intensity of this poem along with all the deep resonating emotions of desperation and other things like that being explored. This really impressed me to say the least :)
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :) & It's not a problem, it seems like that happened an eternity ago now in all honesty hahahaa. & Thank you, I'm glad all that came through :3
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British-Prophetess Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :D lol, glad to know it's not a problem anymore.
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MYSTIcalJADE Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful <3
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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denytheopposed Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
nice work, as always.
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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twili-fan-barb Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
amazing poem :D
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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evil-innocence-16 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
so beautifully written, like always ^^ i love how you kept that base line repeating, but managed to not make it sound overused. this is absolutely wonderful :heart:
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)
& I'm glad, I was kinda worried about that, lol :3
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Alluring-Sin Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
Love it :heart:
I especially like the constant use of the word 'almost'.
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun :heart:
Haha, yay <3 I'm glad it wasn't too repetitive :3
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CheckerboardButtrfly Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
Beautiful and personal.
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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roadfullofpromise Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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roadfullofpromise Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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MySideoftheStreet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
this is really really good! I know the feeling of needing to forget somebody...so all my luck to you. I hope you'll find someone who can make you forget and then some...
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :) I hope I can find someone too; lol.
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Th3Chos3nOn3 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
...wow. I just started to tear a little from reading this. I've been through this same exact situation, but don't talk to either of the two. I just want to forget the other guy...but it's so hard. :cry:
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:

I don't talk to best friend anymore; I talk to my ex though o3o"

I'm sorry it's hard for you, love D: :hug:
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sakurachan456 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow sooo good love it
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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Song-Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
This is really great. Made me think of some of my circumstances, and makes me REALLY not wanna lose my best friend...
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
I hope you don't lose your friend. <3
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Tantio Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Really like the repeating parts/base line you use. And ofcourse the story that is told.
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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BlackSnowWonderland Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The formatting alone is absolutely amazing, and coupled with the words themselves and the message they bring forth so beauteously is spectacular! You have done far more than a wonderful job with this!
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much! :)
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Another brilliant piece!
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, love! :)
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