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Dangerous

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I thought that maybe if I could push you far enough away,
Maybe I could have saved you from me,
& Maybe it wouldn't have ended like it did,
With broken hearts and broken bottles laying at our feet.

I thought that maybe if I could get you to hate me,
  Maybe then, I could save you.
I thought that maybe if you didn't love me anymore,
   Things would get better for you.

I never thought I'd miss you this much,
I never thought that I'd hurt you this much,
    & I never thought that this would hurt me, too.

I never thought it would hurt this much,
But I have to do what I have to do,
And that means, baby, I can't have you.

I'm dangerous, baby.
Don't get too close,
I might run away if you even try to touch me.
& Darling, don't get attached,
'Cause if we got close,
I'd disappoint you,
'Cause  I'd try to help,
     But you wont see it-
& I can't stand losing anyone else.
{Please, I can't lose you too}

I'm dangerous, baby.
I'm gonna cut you deep,
& Watch you bleed, horrified,
I'll cry; 'cause I never meant to hurt you,
But with a b-r-o-k-e-n voice,
& Wide, scared, tearful eyes,
I'll whisper softly that I warned you that I was no good for you.

Babe, you didn't listen,
& I'm hating myself for hurting you.

I'm dangerous, baby,
& All I'm gonna do is hurt you,
So go ahead, run away before I do.
'Cause I don't wanna be the one that |K|I|L|L|S| you.
Oh my goodness! A poem?! From me?! ITS BEEN SO LONG. I'm sorry </3

This poem was written sometime back in Early April.
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squibblyquill's avatar
My immediate thought is that this reminds me of relationship dynamics with someone suffering from Borderline Personality Disorder. My more general thought is...Spuffy is a great pairing, but I think Spike is sometimes more capable of intimacy than Buffy.