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Complete Me

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Darling;
   I'm r e a c h i n g out for you;
            Will you please take my hand?

Love;
I only need o n e little touch;
       I promise, if you take my hand,
          I'll make it through.
             {I wont let go}

Right now;
   I need you; I need your strength,
       For my darling-
          It's you who makes me complete.

Hold my hand-
   Tell me that you care.
          Remind me that you're always there;
                   That your never out of arms r   e   a   c   h.

Hold my hand-
  Complete me.
{Darling, you were the missing puzzle piece}
     

I need you to take my hand in yours,
         I need to feel the energy;
                            the chemistry;
          F l o w i n g from you to me.
                  {You're my strength}

Take my hand in yours,
Remind me I'm not alone,
'Cause the spaces between my fingers are where yours fit;
P     e       r      f     e       c      t      l      y

Hold my hand,
   Look into my eyes,
         Whisper in my ear that you love me,
              & K i s s me sweetly, take my breath a w a y.
                 {You know I love the taste of your lips}
        
Can you hold my hand f o r e v e r?
       'Cause darling, if you release my hand from your loving grasp,
                                            I might not have to power,
                                        To last another night.

You're the only thing that keeps me hanging on.

    So my l o v e,
          Hold my hand & don't let go,
            'Cause as long as your by my side,
                      I know that I can survive,
                            & We can make it through.
Taadaa! 8D Theme number 35 in the 100 Theme Challenge, "Hold my Hand". This one kinda wrote its self. Hahaha.
I think this is really sweet, and I'm kinda happy with it, haha :3

I really wanted to stress that the speaker needs the "you" in order to survive, or at least the speaker thinks it's so.

Let me know what you guys think! :)

:heart:
Kandyi
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simplypirate's avatar
Fantastic! Very sweet and it flows very well! Great job! :clap: