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I'm a hurricane,
A whirlwind of excitement and passion.
Yet once someone catches a glimpse of my center,
It's the start of the end.

I've left devastated dreams in my wake;
Hopes crumbled down to the foundations
& Lives irrevocably changed.

My name drips reverently from the lips those I've tormented.
The pain. The hopelessness. The loss.
I'm not proud of what I've done.
Drowning someone in love still causes asphyxiation.

I was enchanted by you from the moment we first spoke.
You burned my walls down to the ground in an explosion of brilliant light.
The flood of my emotions forced me downstream
& into your fiery embrace.

The pull, the steam, the chemistry.
Two opposing forces collide.
The darkest depths of my soul
are no match for your piercing light.

The sincerity in your voice captivates me.
My body aches for your touch, my heart craves yours.
Baby, you have me burning up.

Are our hearts already intertwined?
I'm yours, are you mine?
I'm surrounded by your warmth, I'm lost in your gaze.
Is this what it feels like to be alive?

I can see the devastation that could be.
High tide could wash away all of your identity.
A wildfire could rip through and leave only ashes to me.

I can see the tranquility that could be.
Your voice alone calms my inner storms.
Your warmth makes me feel at home.

I'm lost in you, I can't help but get caught up.
Your light is blinding, your warmth is inviting.
Just hold on to me, love,
& Promise to never let go.
Hurricane

I'm a wanderess
I'm a one night stand
Don't belong to no city
Don't belong to no man
I'm the violence in the pouring rain
I'm a hurricane
-
Halsey

Sometimes there's a person who helps you feel not so broken. :heart:
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My first mistake was falling in love with the sound of your voice;
Smooth, deep, and rich like top-shelf whisky.
Boy, I was hooked after just a taste.

Fire & Water,
You have me reaching boiling temperatures
With a single glance; a single word.

I'm an enigma, shrouded in mystery.
The sounds off my lips and the curves of my body draw you closer to me.
Babe, all I feel is pure electricity.

There's this pull-this magnetism;
A deeper understanding than I can voice,
A familiar presence that I already adore.

Unexpected, unpredictable.
Wild & beautiful-
I can't wait to see what the adventure of you and me holds.


They say the stars are too far.
Hundreds of thousands of suns
burning billions of light-years away.
Unreachable.

Through hazy eyes he smirks at me and takes another drag.
Sitting in his car at two AM on a warm summer night,
he's billions of light-years away.
Unreachable.

They say that the stars are too far.
But that's never stopped me before.
I'm a poet & a dreamer, I long for the
unreachable.

Through hazy eyes he smirks at me and takes another drag.
I feel him slipping away from me.
But that's never stopped me before.
I long for the unobtainable.

They say that the stars are too far.
I make wishes on them anyway.
Hoping that the hundreds of thousands of suns
hear my quiet prayer.

I'm a poet & a dreamer.
I long for the unobtainable.

Through hazy eyes he smirks at me and takes another drag.
I hold his hand in mine; tough skin against my delicate fingertips.
He looks out into the night and asks me why I'm wasting my time.
I squeeze his hand and whisper, "I long for the unobtainable."
Unobtainable
& I'd do anything.
6/1/16.

So, I'm writing poetry again! I wrote this one the other day, and I'm not sure how I feel about it. I just had this idea of stars and this is the result. :D

Feedback Questions:
How was the flow?
Was the repetition too much/overly done?
What's the feeling this poem leaves you with?
Anything I could improve?

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Old habits die hard,
& My favorite one smells like cigarettes and sex.
He hurts me, & I can't get enough.
Fist in my hair, bruises on my body.
I ask him for more until I'm hoarse.

Old habits die hard,
& My worst one is the way I use my body.
Baby, I don't need you to love me.
I just want you to touch right there.
& Once it's done you can leave.

Old habits die hard,
& My favorite one smells like cigarettes and sex.
He hurts me & I can't get enough.
Scars all over, ink scribbled on paper.
He's the one I'm always complaining about.

Old habits die hard,
& My worst one is the way I use my body.
Baby, I don't need you to love me.
I know you think I'm some kind of angel,
don't let these innocent eyes fool you.

Old habits die hard,
& My favorite one smells like cigarettes and sex.
He hurts me & I can't get enough.
Fuck you, fuck me.
It doesn't matter as long as we both get that next hit.

Old habits die hard,
& My worst one is the way I use my body.
Baby, I don't want you to love me.
I'm a broken bitch,
& I don't have any faith in love these days.

Old habits die hard,
& My favorite one smells like cigarettes and sex.
He hurts me & I love it.
Even though I know it's a terrible idea, I go back every time.
With every bruise and scar, I love him a little more.

Old habits die hard,
& My worst one is the way I use my body.
You can't love me,
my affection is a lethal toxin,
use at your own risk.
Terrible Habits.
My worst fear is to be truely loved.
Just fuck me till I can't think straight. Then it doesn't matter if there's any love at all.
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You're a bad idea,
But I never care in the moment.
I've sung the same song about you over & over:
The Lover I can never have-
Unless it's for a rough roll between the sheets.

I've never been the woman to get caught up.
I've always been the one who loves & leaves before they've realized what I've done.
I'm far from innocent, a trail of scorned lovers mark my path.

Are you my damnation?
My punishment for all the hearts I've broken?
{including yours, on occasion}

You're my favorite mistake.
Your hands in my hair, hot breath on my neck.
Baby, you know just what I need.
Your fist clenched around my windpipe; your husky voice in my ear.
All tangled up with you is my favorite place to be.

Our encounters always leave me breathless.
You know my body like the back of your hand-
You know just how to touch me, exactly what to say.
& You use me so well.

I always loved and hated you,
But I hate you the most when I love you.
Your arm lazily draped over my waist,
Gentle kisses on my shoulder-
Fuck you, babe.
You've made me fall in love with you again.

Our chemistry is toxic.
But I'll be dammed either way.
No matter who I'm with, no matter where I am,
I'm always pulled back to you.

My distant lover,
The one I can never have.
Why do you light my soul on fire?

Your face in the morning tells me everything.
We're both trying so hard to remain detached.
You hug me tightly and breathe in my scent,
But we never kiss-it's safer this way.

I watch you leave through the curtains.
The ache in my chest is far less pleasant than the one between my thighs.
You're a bad idea,
But I never care in the moment.
My Favorite Mistake
"I've got a lover I love like religion,
I'm such a fool for sacrifice.
It's coming down, I'm coming down.
It's coming down, I'm coming down.
I've got a lover and I'm unforgiven,
I'm such a fool to pay this price."

Halsey- Coming Down.

That song has been making me have ALL the feels recently.
I know it's been 5ever since you guys have heard from me. I'm sorry about it, but I just havent had much time for poetry these days. However, long story short the one person probably about half my poems are written about and I met for the first time in October, and we saw each other again for a wedding a few weeks ago. This is the result of me feels after we spent the night together. I've had feels for him since I was 13. I'm now 20.  Yeah this poem has some adult themes, but his and my relationship does as well ( and pretty much always has).

As always feedback and shit is always welcome <3
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DA was always my diary when I was younger. It might be time to start using it again.

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Larathain Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2016
Happy birthday! May it be a day of perfect weather and joyful bliss! One you'll enjoy to often offer reminisce.
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Musical-Tragedy27 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013   Writer
Happy Happy Birthday =]
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akarra Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student Writer
Watching. Your poems could easily be song lyrics with a bit of tinkering. Keep up the great work!
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! (:
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AyA-KR Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave!
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TangerineTerranova Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the two faves!!!!
hope you have an amazing week!!!!! :D :D
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Spuffy12 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're more than welcome! :D

You too! :D :D
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Vyctorian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012   Digital Artist
Thank you for the favorite
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You're more than welcome (:
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^.^
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